Yeah. "There will never be a better deal!" should be separated from the rest, with no bullet point. At least it's kind of cute.
When I wrote for the newspaper a hundred years ago, I didn't have to worry about grammar or spelling, because I had a good proofreader to do all the corrections and send it back to me before printing. Thank goodness!
They should have sent this around to the office to get people to proofread it before making it final. These are easy mistakes to make, and easy to look miss.
-Travis
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I see what you did there with those last words....
The amusement park rises bold and stark..kids are huddled on the beach in a mist
http://support.gktw.org/site/TR/CoastingForKids/General?px=1248054&...fr_id=1372
No, the final bullet point isn't right. The first five indicate what your season pass can be used for: discounts, free drinks, upgrades.
You won't be able to use your pass to get a better deal that, they say, will never exist. They'll want to see your credit card. :-)
Life is something that happens when you can't get to sleep.
--Fran Lebowitz
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