sfgm trip 10 24 04

ok i went to sfgm sun the 24 it was packed we went on dejavu we got stuck we only road a few rides and saw some shows and checked out the picnic area had fun thou with all the monsters lol took my cam corder. we road 4 rides all daytheir was 5 of us. i usaly dont ride much rides during frigh fest to busy i just go to have a good time take in the shows and watch the monsters and the reactions of others when they get chased.

Dude, get yourself "Hooked On Phonics" and learn how to write. I have a seven year old niece that can write better than you.

Seven? I was thinking five, Bob!

Scariest thing is according to his/her profile, fancy is 34 years old !

Not so fancy ;)

I went to SFGAm on Sunday the 24. I took my camcorder. It was packed. We went on Deja Vu- we got stuck. We only rode a few rides, saw some shows and checked out the picnic area. Had fun though with all the monsters LOL. We rode four rides all day- there was five of us. I usually don't ride many rides during Fright Fest- too busy. I just go to have a good time, take in the shows, and watch the monsters and the reactions of those getting chased.

Here's what it would be like just written okay (just did a quick revision.) The words in bold were either wrong or spelled wrong, and the setence structure & such was very messed up, yet now it's actually understandable.

Please people, just try! *** Edited 10/25/2004 9:18:39 PM UTC by coasterwiz***

I am not the biggest critic on spelling and grammar like others, but wow!!!

fancy: You need to try again.

Closing.