I LOOOOVE CEDAR POINT!

WELL,A FEW WEEKENDS AGO I WENT TO CEDAR POINT WITH MY FRIEND CASSIE FOR THE FIRST TIME.IVE HEARD SO MUCH ABOUT THIS PARK,SO I WAS LIKE I HAVE TO GO!WHEN WE GOT THERE IT WAS JUST LIKE HEAVEN TO US,THERE WERE SO MANY RIDES AND SO MUCH TO DO!.WE DIDNT REALLY KNOW THE LAYOUT OF THE PARK SO WE HAD TO GET A MAP(WHICH WE FELT SO STUPID DOING BECAUSE LIKE EVERYONE ELSE THERE WALKED AROUND LIKE THEY GO THERE ALL THE TIME).WELL WE RODE RAPTOR FIRST,AND GEMINI,MAGNUM XL200,AND SOME OTHER COASTERS THERE.WELL THE LAST RIDE WE DECIDED TO RIDE WAS MILLENIUM FORCE,AND ANYONE WHO HAS BEEN ON IT KNOWS WHAT IT FEEL LIKE TO STAND NEXT TO THAT THING!WE WALK UP AND CASSIE KINDA STARTS TO FREAK OUT,SHE LOVES COASTERS BUT NONE THIS HUGE.I CONVINCE HER TO GO ON IT WITH ME AND AS SOON AS WE GET ON I ALREADY LOVED THIS COASTER!THE CABLE LIFT SYSTEM MAD THE TRIP UP SO QUICK AND EXCITING.OMG,THE VIEW FROM THE VERY TOP OF THIS MONSTER WAS THE MOST AMAZING THING I HAVE EVER SEEN.THIS COASTER IS IN MY TOP TEN NOW.I PLAN TO GO THERE ALOT NOW,WITHOUT A MAP!

Please lose the caps, and use some spacing. Other than that...good short and sweet TR.

I'm sorry man... my eyes hurt so much from that, I can't even read it! Re-edit the whoooole thing with normal-case lettering, paragraphs, & proper spacing.

Now, if you'll excuse me... I gotta pop some Excedrines.

was it busy at all the day u went?

*eyes burn from reading all caps* I do agree with SFGAdv, 'twas short and sweet. *still has to go to CP, depressed*

LIKE OMG! IM SO GLAD U LIKE HAD SUCH A GOOD TIME. I LIKE LIKE CEDAR POINT SO MUCH! IM GOING THERE LIKE THIS TUESDAY!

Ok caps annoy me. the overusage of the word 'like' also annoys me. Sorry. You sound like a 15 year old girl at the mall.