I think what he was referring to was the lack of sentence structure and punctuation in your trip report. Taking a little time to proofread and develop complete thoughts can make a world of difference in a trip report, and make it much more enjoyable to read.
You only get one chance to make a first impression. If you are going to take the time to post your thoughts for the world to see, make sure you present them in a way which you would like the world to see you.
I got half way through your trip report and already knew what the next post was going to say. Well, almost halfway through...it was hard to read.
Anyway, just some friendly constructive criticism. *** Edited 7/31/2006 4:24:56 PM UTC by 40belowbeef*** *** Edited 7/31/2006 4:25:44 PM UTC by 40belowbeef***
Besides you might have just cost yourself the pleasure of deleting your account with such comments, not a bright way to make an impression.
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See, I feel the way you do sometimes, dude. Just don't make a HUGE deal out of it. We're just having alittle fun.
nonnahs I understood everything you said. You don't have to be an english major to type what you feel. I always like to here good things about the home park.
I agree with you somewhat on SOB. I"ll miss it's presence, but I won't hate to see it go. I do hope that if it is taken out they replace it with a coaster(Hopefully steel)
Nonnahs-If you are going to post here, please try to use better grammar, especially when describing different rides. Hell, I got lost on your second sentence. Just remember next time, thats all.
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