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Several people are charged with various crimes in a scam allegedly designed to steal money from Cedar Point games.
Read more from The Morning Journal.
Link: PointBuzz
Also, Trick Track - as Jeff already clarified, there's nothing wrong with the article at all. Remember the first rule of anything is to cover your own ass.
-Josh
I can't believe the first employee actually let someone he did not know and with no name tag go to the games office. It might have been one of the young workers at the park who got scared thinking he was in trouble.
However, the writer should have mixed it up a bit, such as starting a paragraph with "Court records said..." or putting the phrase within the paragraph somewhere.
I suspect the writer turned in the story with no attribution at all, and a hurried editor quickly added those phrases.
14 "according to court records"
1 "court records stated"
1 "according to jail records"
of course this recap is according to the paper's records.
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